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Re: Timeline critique



--- In romanceconlang@yahoogroups.com, Adam Walker <carrajena@y...> 
wrote:
> 
> I have begun webbifying my alternate timeline for Carthage.  I'm 
currently up to AD 763.  I would appreciate constructive comments (on 
the innovations marked in red) and corrections of errors on other 
dates/events.  Also, suggestions for other mommentus events which I 
have overlooked would be appreciated.  Any one who would like to take 
a look can go here http://www.geocities.com/carrajena/timeline.html 
to see what's up thus far.
>  
> Adam
This is more thorough than my personal one for the Fortunate Isles, 
also a traditionally Donatist realm (but FI was extremely isolated). 
The use of colors works well. The number of revolts are certainly 
realistic. AD 442 - the word is 'secede', not 'ceceed'. One last 
question: how wide is the area of Carrajena speakers?
Theophilus