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>
> lesson10:
>	Imagine a dirty blue automobile outside a big mansion.
>	Vesindoy cango cimyu bunago va bufudindu sevu binsa va.
> sts: i'd say "vesinzoy".
>

Good point!  I agree.

>
> lesson10:
>	Do you want me to keep this table short like that one?
>	Kibe casi tumi buxunsanfa mi vozwe ju batende tujunti?
> sts: i don't understand why it's "batende". why not simply "bate"? hm...
>

Because it's being used as a case tag, NOT a noun modifier.

>
> lesson10:
>	The actor saw one blue bird climbing down the wall.
>	Pi vezdi tubyo ji cimyu semu buxuskinze xukxe.
> sts: ha! i thought it was "Pi vezdi tubyo buxuskinza ji cimyu semu 
> xukxe." this would be the same in english, wouldn't it?
>

Your suggestion is better because it's not ambiguous.  The original is
acceptable but it's also ambiguous because it could also imply that the
actor was climbing down the wall.

>
> lesson11:
>	I got the slow heavy truck far away from here.
>	Tenja mi fungo funsa bucaynsa pedi kwanti.
> sts: what about "xenikwa" instead of "pedi kwanti"?
>

No, because "nikwa" does not represent a scalar state.

>
> lesson11:
>	That distant skyscraper has a good penthouse restaurant.
>	Tenda civu pensa niju funye cansa va te gexuto.
> sts: what about "pedinto" instead of "pensa"?
>

I suppose so, but why make things more complicated than they have to be?
"Pedinto" literally means 'far from something known from context', which
implies a referent, and in this case, a referent is simply not needed.

>
> kastebyo,
> 

"Kastebyo" is not a valid proper name.  Since "ste" is a classifier, it
cannot appear between "ka" and the intended classifier "byo".  How about
"Kazdebyo", "Kastibyo", "Kazdefabyo", or "Kastifabyo"?


By the way, it's obvious that I'm not as careful as I should be when I
prepare these lessons.  Thanks for the corrections!


Regards,

Rick Morneau
http://www.srv.net/~ram
http://www.eskimo.com/~ram