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new comments on ref-doc and lessons



here some more comments:

lesson10:
	Imagine a dirty blue automobile outside a big mansion.
	Vesindoy cango cimyu bunago va bufudindu sevu binsa va.
sts: i'd say "vesinzoy".

lesson10:
	Do you want me to keep this table short like that one?
	Kibe casi tumi buxunsanfa mi vozwe ju batende tujunti?
sts: i don't understand why it's "batende". why not simply "bate"? hm...

lesson10:
	The actor saw one blue bird climbing down the wall.
	Pi vezdi tubyo ji cimyu semu buxuskinze xukxe.
sts: ha! i thought it was "Pi vezdi tubyo buxuskinza ji cimyu semu xukxe." this would be the same in english, wouldn't it?

lesson11:
	I got the slow heavy truck far away from here.
	Tenja mi fungo funsa bucaynsa pedi kwanti.
sts: what about "xenikwa" instead of "pedi kwanti"?

lesson11:
	That distant skyscraper has a good penthouse restaurant.
	Tenda civu pensa niju funye cansa va te gexuto.
sts: what about "pedinto" instead of "pensa"?

lesson11:
	The wealthy actor will be eager to tell me about his
	  mansion and his limousine.
	Goy caysi tubyo sensa jada mi sevu tuho ne sengo tuho
sts: the period is missing.

lesson11:
	Koda mi Kamexebyo bube pi fudinda tadya binsa tumu takotoy
sts:period is missing.

kastebyo,
sts.