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On 6/16/05, Rex May <rmay@hidden.email> wrote: > http://www.geocities.com/ceqli/gramintro3.html Formatting typo: go zu tomo ja parizo. >BR>I use car go Paris. (I go to Paris by car.) This chapter is overall fairly good, but it would be improved (as would the earlier chapters) by giving true interlinear glosses as well as the regular English glosses. See http://www.eva.mpg.de/lingua/files/morpheme.html Also, in the earlier chapters it seems that you never explicitly described ceqli's word order. The examples you give make it mostly clear, but it would make sense to explicitly describe the word order rules early on. Are there any extended texts in ceqli besides the dialogue between the two ladies (which doesn't seem to be on the site anymore)? The site navigation leaves a lot to be desired - several of the subpages have no links in them to the main page or other pages. At a minimum, every page on the site should link up to the main page, and probably each grammar page should link to the glossary and the succeeding chapter of the grammar. At the bottom of http://www.geocities.com/ceqli/Uploadexp.htm there is a 1999 copyright notice, which might misleadingly suggest the page hasn't been updated in ages and the languag development is dormant. Better: (c) 1997-2005 Rex F. May. Main page last updated on [date]; subpages may have been updated more recently. -- Jim Henry http://www.pobox.com/~jimhenry/review/log.htm